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Beat Me by ~Foxyfur7:iconFoxyfur7:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


"Sticks and stones
may break my bones
but words
will never hurt me."
But wait
and stop
and think
and you'll realize its not true.
Your tongue is like a sword
and your words can pierce my heart;
like a knife through the thing
that gives me life.
Just dig it in
and twist it;
make me bleed
make me cry.
Keep talking
keep accusing
if you think
that it can't hurt me.
So just go ahead
and beat me;
and if you don't
get what I mean
I'm talking about
verbally.
©2008-2009 ~Foxyfur7
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Haha. I thought of this in the shower. XD lol My irl friend, Kimberly, has been saying "Sticks and stones may break my bones; but ropes and chains excite me" (LOL omg do u get it XD nvmd).

So I was thinking of the original saying, and realized that words can hurt. Alot. So the person who first said that was either dumb or entirely too lucky. Uhm...so please enjoy it kay? ^^
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~xstrangeCANDY:iconxstrangeCANDY: Nov 17, 2008, 5:31:25 PM
i really like this piece. :3

i think i might just fave it too. c:
-faved-

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I'm a puzzle with several pieces missing...
~Foxyfur7:iconFoxyfur7: Nov 29, 2008, 1:42:30 PM
O:
Thank you very much! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it~

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...And They have Us screaming into microphones for attention :heart:
Everyone has artistic intuition but only artists learn to control it.
.....LIKE SUPER-POWERS!! *shot*

P. S. I love you <3 MARRY ME XD
~xstrangeCANDY:iconxstrangeCANDY: Nov 30, 2008, 2:02:18 PM
<3
you're welcome.

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I'm a puzzle with several pieces missing...
~xXxMasumixXx:iconxXxMasumixXx: Jun 5, 2009, 9:21:33 PM
I just felt like scavenging through your little writings and I found this. :D

I CAN'T BELIEVE KIMMY SAIZ THAT. XD
Kimberly Y., right? 8D

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I am May~ !SupaBluefire
--
♪Don't let my romance become
a Juliet tragedy, Take me out of here...
That's what I'm feeling like.♫
-dorikoさま
~Foxyfur7:iconFoxyfur7: Jun 10, 2009, 3:01:12 PM
:ohnoes: O i c. =D

AND YES! YES INDEED! XDDD She hasn't said it this year but she liked saying it in seventh grade XD

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It's the Freakin Weekend.
96% of my heart is used to love Fall Out Boy. Copy and paste this to my forehead.
My name is [not] Alfredo.
~xXxMasumixXx:iconxXxMasumixXx: Jun 10, 2009, 3:09:24 PM
yus. c:
OH: BTW; me MarMar started playing Perfect World yesterday; it is awesomeful. =3 (We haven't met up in the game, though, lol. XD)

XD ZOMG. But STILL, oh shiznit. XD

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I am May~ !SupaBluefire
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♪And we sang a-away, away, away~
And the voices rang like the angels sing,
And singing a-away, away, away~
And we danced on into the night~♫
-Nickelback (feat. Santana)
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Icon by: ~BubbleLum
~Foxyfur7:iconFoxyfur7: Jun 15, 2009, 6:38:14 PM
OooOOOhhhHHHh. Is it fun? XD What do you do?

lolwut XDDDD; *totes lost* 8D

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It's the Freakin Weekend.
96% of my heart is used to love Fall Out Boy. Copy and paste this to my forehead.
My name is [not] Alfredo.
~xXxMasumixXx:iconxXxMasumixXx: Jun 15, 2009, 6:45:37 PM
It's like Maple Story, except better graphics... and if you become a winged elf, you can fliez. <333333333 c:


Oh and I was talking about Kimmy saying that phrase.

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I am May~ !SupaBluefire
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♪And we sang a-away, away, away~
And the voices rang like the angels sing,
And singing a-away, away, away~
And we danced on into the night~♫
-Nickelback (feat. Santana)
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Icon by: ~BubbleLum
~Foxyfur7:iconFoxyfur7: Jun 15, 2009, 7:25:20 PM
:ohnoes: ...Makes sense XD All of it really. Very insightful <3 c:

--
It's the Freakin Weekend.
96% of my heart is used to love Fall Out Boy. Copy and paste this to my forehead.
My name is [not] Alfredo.
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